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Hello! I've recently thoughtbeen thinking about having more smart home devices. It willwould make our life easier, safer, and prevent accidents!
First, it could make our lives easier. We won't have to walk to the
light switches at bedtime or in the morning. We won't have to close the curtains anymore,; all we .....

Hey Bob,

We talked a couple weeks back at the chamber of commerce event. (I was the one looking for a summer internship and had a zit on my lip that could have passed for a cold soar. Lol. Whewsore, lol, whew. It was not. You’re probably like, “uh“Uh.. What?” Maybe that helps you recall, maybe not. Not completely i.....

Being addicted to social media can affectsaffect your health. Staring at the screen totoo much hours affectaffects your sightssight. If people spend their time researching problems or arguing with people, they may experience stress, which can have a negative impact on their health (cite). cyberCyber harassment and health issues ar.....

Hello. goodGood afternoon, everyone. howHow are you.you? Today, I will talk about the choices in my future, so firstly let me introduce myself. My name is Hoor, and I am a law student in a low college, so I will be working in a court to help thetry to help people.

So
, let’s start. There are many choices for my future job. .....

I think part of beingbecoming a perfect school is fixing the food issue here. The food they serve is not good at all which makes, making it to whereso that kids dontdon't even eat lunch anymore. This can affect a lot of kids because it can makecause them to be angry orand hungry and thatsthat's not the type of learning enviromentenvironment kids an.....

Dear SAP Team,
We have completed the user-based sizing and throughput sizing is pending due to the functional inputs, which
waswere requested. I have attached the latest version of SAP quick sizer questionerQuick Sizer questionnaire.
You are
requestrequested to refer to the attached referral guide "How to fill in the questionerquestionnair.....

Dear Hiring Manager,

I'm writing to apply for the
position of Fashion Media withinposition available at your company.

Studying Textile
designDesign at University of the Arts London has furthered my knowledge and understanding of fashion and design. Here is a link to my latest project: https://chelseadegreeshow.com/s/kun-.....

One Puritan ideal that continues into today's society is the value of education. The Puritans were very religious and believed to have a strong connection with godGod. They valued education so much because they wanted everyone to be able to read the bibleBible. Being able to read and write was very importan.....

Dear Ruby,
Thank you so much for dropping me off at the airport! I hope New York won’t be as stormy when I come back home from my trip. I’m currently at a bakery across from dad’s house, in Provence, France. The scenery is absolutely beautiful
, there. There are fields filled with sun-kissed lavender and go.....

Hi, Adam ,
How are you? I hope you are well.
Past holidays
, when Mymy parents and I waswere in the capital city of Germany, I met Grim. I met him in oldOld Town. He was 14 years old and he was very longtall. He has brown hair and green eyes. He asked me, "Can Iyou join to me?". We played in the same game toghetertogether. Unf.....

A veces conoces a personas que no planeabaplaneabas conocer, simplemente llegan a tu vida y no te das cuenta de cuan importe son, hasta que se van. Son de esas personas que siempre las quieres tener cerca, no sabes el "por queporqué" o "para quequé", solo sabes que son ese complemento que siempre has necesitado para .....

sheShe says: she faces several challenges: first, the search for firewood to ignite the furnace, and it often prevents the use of forest trees, according to the laws of overgrazing. Then comes the trouble of searching for suitable soil, as she does not have her own land from which to extract from it, and the.....

שלום רב ,
אני הסטודנטית האזר אבו גיבנה ת.ז 206327439
, לגבי החלטתפונה בנוגע להחלטת הוועדה בהפסקתעל הפסקת לימודיי .
הייתיחיכיתי מחכה לציונים ועברתיונראה שעברתי בציונים טובים . אני מבקשת רק לקבל את הזכות שלי לגשת למבחנים שלא הייתי יכולה לגשת אליהם , אחד היה מתנגשהתנגש עם קורס אחר והשני היה בחגנפל על חג הקורבן . נשארו לי רק שני הקורסים האלה מסמסטר ב ב׳. אם ל.....

Did you know, while studying at Thomas Edison State University, student couldstudents can apply for course extension? There are some minimum requirements that hashave to be meetmet before the course extension is acceptaccepted, but there are optionoptions to allow to extra time to complete the course. While in school, sometimes perso.....

Dear Iris,

First of all
, my sincere apologies for this latedelayed reply and thank you for your interest in DAES. The membership indeed offers you the opportunity to get in contact with other exchange students. At least once a month, DAES organizes two activities, these. These activities mostly take place in.....

Hypertension is also known as high blood pressure. It is the chronic elevation of the blood pressure in someone’s arteries, whichand it may cause cardiovascular problems later on. Blood
pressure
couldcan be broken up into two parts,: systolic and diastolic. Systolic is defined as when the
heart muscles contract
.....

The world is cruel. There are murders, robberies, Racismracism, discrimination, lying, and shootings. Just, just to name a few. Such asFor example, in El Paso, Texas, on August 3, 2019, a guy killed 22 people in a Walmart, and for what? No reason! In the book, BoysBoy's Life, by Robert McCammon, Cory deals with another cr.....

I was at the hospital from last night and was only given the go signal to conecome home around 8 this morning. The doctor ordered a ctCT scan, wanting to rule out the possibility of a mild stroke. I had numbness on the left side of my body, and my bp was high when I checked in at the emergency registration.....

All thoughAlthough I was just an athlete on the cross country team, cross country changed my high school experience. Heading into high school, I was awkward, with braces, super skinny, and just uncomfortable in my own skin. I never ran long distancesdistance before but thought I would give it a shot. After all, it was.....

All thoughAlthough I was just an athlete on the cross country team, cross country changed my high school experience. Heading into high school, I was awkward with braces, super skinny, and just uncomfortable in my own skin. I never ran long distances before but thought I would give it a shot. After all, it was.....

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